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skylar0grace) wrote2010-09-29 10:30 am
skylar0grace) wrote2010-09-29 10:30 am
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Bad!fic *Was She His?*
Okay, I know you guys are gonna read this and think "WHAT?!!!" But trust me, I have not slipped and bashed my head! I HAD to write this for a challenge and it was supposed to be bad. Probably supposed to be worse than this but it was so hard and I rewrote it a dozen times trying to make it worse (and accidently correcting spelling errors I'd intentionally put in :P ). This is what i ended up with. VERY hard challenge but I LOVED IT!!!! Can't wait to do another!!! :P So read and PLEASE let me know what you think and how I can make it worse! I mean, seriously, how many people ask that? :D
Title: Was She His?
Logan was walking around his apartment waiting for Max to come back from her mission. With Alec. Logan didn't like Alec. He wasn't sure exactly what it was but he did know that there was something between his not-like-that girlfriend and her breeding partner. Max kept saying there was nothing going on between them but he saw the looks between the to X5's. He knew that he should havedone something about their relationship when he had the chance but he'd put it off. And now it was too late. Well not really. He knew there was a cure out there somewhere. He just had to make sure that Max stayed with him although he knew that he couldn't help her out on cases like Alec could and that she thought it was safer for him if he stayed at his place and he really could help her out more if he could feed her information but he loved her so much and really didn't want to lose her, especially not to Alec. Max and Alec walked in the apartment.
"Did you get the information?"
"Yeah, we got it," Alec said sarcastically.
"I wasn't asking you," said Logan.
"Yes Logan, we got the information."
Max and Alec shared a look that Logan couldn't decide on what it was and his heart hurt. They gave him the information on the disc and then Max pulled Alec out of the apartment with barely a goodbye over her shoulder. Logan sat down and sighed. He was loosing her and he didn't like it but he had to get her back. Yes, he would get her back and she would know how much she loved him. Oh yes she would.
Title: Was She His?
Logan was walking around his apartment waiting for Max to come back from her mission. With Alec. Logan didn't like Alec. He wasn't sure exactly what it was but he did know that there was something between his not-like-that girlfriend and her breeding partner. Max kept saying there was nothing going on between them but he saw the looks between the to X5's. He knew that he should havedone something about their relationship when he had the chance but he'd put it off. And now it was too late. Well not really. He knew there was a cure out there somewhere. He just had to make sure that Max stayed with him although he knew that he couldn't help her out on cases like Alec could and that she thought it was safer for him if he stayed at his place and he really could help her out more if he could feed her information but he loved her so much and really didn't want to lose her, especially not to Alec. Max and Alec walked in the apartment.
"Did you get the information?"
"Yeah, we got it," Alec said sarcastically.
"I wasn't asking you," said Logan.
"Yes Logan, we got the information."
Max and Alec shared a look that Logan couldn't decide on what it was and his heart hurt. They gave him the information on the disc and then Max pulled Alec out of the apartment with barely a goodbye over her shoulder. Logan sat down and sighed. He was loosing her and he didn't like it but he had to get her back. Yes, he would get her back and she would know how much she loved him. Oh yes she would.